T West - that was basic yet it ended up deep...how the fights and arguments all were settled by the love the child brought....that was a nice piece....vocab was basic....aint no bad criticism to give...just additions that will make this go from good to excellent...maybe a multi here and there....they help...but ur storyline was nice...and this was a good drop....give it a 8.6/10...
shadow - another deep verse...this had a slightly better vocab...same basic yet deep storyline...u took this topic from a very different point of view...and was harder to do...u pulled it off though which is good....flow was nice....i think u edged him out just by a little with the more complex story,lil better vocab, and hitting a creative topical...this was a dope battle...give it a 8.9/10...
vote - shadow
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