Yeah, I thought it was good. It was definitely an emotional peice. I think you really hit your heart on that one and let yourself open up, which is what poetry is all about. However, for me, sometimes it's hard to read a poem and actually give it any recognition and not get bored with it when you use abbreviations. I don't know if maybe that was just part of the artistic nature in which you wanted to display it, or maybe it's just out of habit. Either way, I didn't like that. However, on the total, I liked it. Good job.

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I'll wait for you there
where the sun doesn't shine
Wait for you there
where the shadows run from themselves