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sproradic came harder in every category with mad wordplay and personals.his structure wasnt the best but it was original(i think).
Energy,on the other hand,had a complete alphabet soup verse.very herbish.you need to work on your wordplay and structure.dont put the /'s at the end of your lines,makes you look ''newbish''.all I can say is elevate and you'll get there.
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