string:you had some good punches in there,funny ones at that, i liked ya opener, but ya structure is a little off, you came hard at your opponent and thats what counts in a battle...i liked the line "the only label u on is nutritional packs", good shit...
justify:you had good flow and structure, but you lacked hard punches in ya verse, try using multies in ya verses and personals, u need to work on those..
VOTE:STRING

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