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Old 07-20-04, 02:48 AM   #11
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ima have to say jokah on this one, ya had good punches,creative vocabulary used against your opponent, and an overall better verse here......
slugga:ya took the structure and flow categories, but thats all, u needed to come a little harder, whats wit the fifty punches? anyways decent battle overall...
VOTE:jokah
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