bullethole
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure wasnt very good...u had some short lines, but then some stretched ones as well...not very consistent...flow fell off due to the lack on consistency...u had a few metas...no good wordplay...a few of ur punches barely connected...no good personals...

Trajed'ee
dont seperate ur lines, or put the /s at the end...both r newb tendecies...structure was ok...most of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off due to the strechness...no good metas...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had a good structure...Trajed'ee had the slightly better flow...neither had good metas...both had wack wordplay...neither had good personals......bullethole had more connecting punches...and punches r more important to flow, so basing off of that...bullethole gets my vote...

VOTE - BULLETHOLE

P.S., Check in and spit in our battle, bullethole...dont forget...