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IP:
SLUGGA
YOU NO COMP SO WHY TEMPT ME
CAUSE YOU NOT A RAPPER YOU FONZWORTH BENTLEY/
->>flow doesnt work
AND YOU GOT ME WASTING BARS,
I'LL LEAVE YOUR GIRL SKIRT STICKY LIKE SHE USED TO MUCH STARCH/
->>weak
EVERY ONE KNOWS WHO DA TRU STARS IS, (SLUGGA)
YOU BET ME IS TRU NON SENSE/
->>doesnt really rhyme and too short
NOW LETS GET HONEST
YOU WANT WIN AN DATS A PROMISE/
->>decent
I SHOULDNT OF WENT FIRST CAUSE NOW YOU SCARED,
AND YOU ATRU STAR NO NO NO LIKE JAE MILLZ SAID/
->>ok closer this was your best line
*The~Star*
Ask me if I’m scared when ya verse equals trash
It stinks more than the shit that comes out ya ass
->>weak second line
Thought you some competition, but I was fooled
Rapping obviously ain’t ya thang, so stay in school
->>ok punch
Never step to me acting like you got true skill
Now you getting cooked on my BQ grill
->>decent
Name ya-self Slugga when you too weak to swing a bat
I’m leaving you upside down as if you was a bat
->>pretty good
The moral for you to learn, don’t fuck with the Star
I’m dropping everything in site, guess you can call me Sars
->>good closer
Star you took this...slugga your bar lengths were all over the place and nothing you said hit that hard. The star didnt come too hard but she didnt have to
v/ The Star
\/Dont sleep\/
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I got the lettuce and...
...you turn green like cucumber skin
Got the new hummer in the summer when I was a new comer then...
drugs and mac-10's...hugs from fake friends..."
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mad Dog
i'm not attracted to women...
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