vote village pimp, cuz shit made more sense

trajedee... i unno u gotta throw some punches man, u had decent flow...
some multies and shit, no real disses tho, or witty punchlines...
use some wordplay to... and fix ur structure... otherwise, u need to elevate.

VP - flow was bad, strcuture was too stretched.. punches were weak..
u focused on rhyming to much and got away from punches...
but u had some decent creativitiy and some ok disses.... average tho..

vote - vp


vote here fellas.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136173