Moderator
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IP:
Play-toh
structure is decent...u did have a few stretched lines though...flow fell off a little bit...no good multis...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good peronals...
Mr.Washington
structure is good...flow is on target...u had one multi...wordplay was tight...most of ur punches connected...no good personals...
Overall
neither had good personals...Mr.Washington had the better structure...the more stable flow...one more multis...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Mr.Washington gets my vote...
VOTE - MR.WASHINGTON
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