aight this was a 1 sided battle the whole way,slugga your verse was pretty simple,some of your lines did'nt ryme n that redrum/murder backwards epitome was lame,bad structure work on your syllable count for better flow,
schema:thought your verse was funny shit,ya had humour in your whole verse n had structure on lock personal punches were alright,n ya dint bother talkin bout gansta shit which was good ta see...
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