god damn all these newb don't have enough post to vote.

I’m start doing topical battles. Heres my verse on life as a gun
i'm being held tightly in the hands of a kid//
i got 16 in the clip and one in the hole so i'm fully loaded//
and i ain't had the feeling of being bust yet//
i can tell that this kid is nervious cause i can feel his sweet//
we hiding in the bushes and I’m tried of waitin//
I just want one of my bullet to break in, some skin//
i'm ready to blast, at any cat that walks past//
all of a sudden i'm moving and going fast, look behide the cops is on our ass//
i got dropped and with the pain of hitting the gound//
i let one go out the camber and everyone went down//
but one did't come back up, and i don't mean to brag//
but no i have to live my life in an air tight evidence bag//

anywhere down to the voting.
flow: both
style: str8
understanding of topic: lethal
feel: lethal
who got deeper into it: lethal

ayo str8 it was a good flow and style andnice name
but you started rapping about d12 and biggie and jay and pun and pac idk but it seem like that ain't gotta do with a guns life

lethal i didn't like the tyle that center shit. other than that good. i liked the vision i got with your words.

vote lethal and i can really vote lol

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