uh...seems perfect to me...seriously i cant find that much wrong with it, except that when i spit it over a beat the flow seemed a little messy, but that might just be my fault, best thing to do to perfect a flow is exactly whut i do, spit yours over a beat over and over till the flow is to your liking, other than that theres really nothin wrong with it, uh, try elevatin your vocab?(not) its good man good this would get a 9/10 if not a 10/10..

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