hmmmmm....


---kingz-...decent verse... shoudla came back and shadowed it to define ur punches.... but u had soem decent punches.... alotta personals.... but delivery was kinda wack.... even thoguh its a slow beat u shoulda found a way to keep more words in it... u slowed down for the beat whhich didn't sound good...

carson-- in a 40 second drop.......... nice flow...and with punches ur delievery comes offf nice.... smooth sound... not as choppy as teh kingz... liked the beat... brings a def look... nice punches and personal.....

overall... CarsonJ



.....and...Kingz....lmao when u said herb... u pronouced it with a (ha) ....instead of (erb)...

F.Y.I.

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