Ya, Content Wise You Have Nothing To Do...
The Only Thing I Would Change Would Be To Add Some Multies To Help Your Flow Out...
Because Content Wise Shit Was A Masterpiece...

My fingers clutch around the pen
its tip drifts across the paper,
as the ink touches a blank canvas
I gain the gift of a creator.

^^^...
That Was By Far My Favorite Line...
A Beautify Opener...
It Really Just Drew Me Into The Rest Of It...
But Ya, I'd Give It A 8.5/10...
Simple Because Of The Flow Issue...
I Like Your Way With Words Though...
Get At Me If You Want Me To Check Anything Else You Write Cuz I Enjoy Reading Ya Work...
~One~