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Old 07-20-04, 02:56 PM   #7
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From: Da Bean
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li chi....your not terribble you just need some elevation kidd...srtucture...structure...structure..flow was ight use more punches and metas...up ya vocab son it will help

chase good shit son...even thoughy uo was basically talkin to the kidd..
good structure good wordplay punches minmial but you didnt need many


vote big chase
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