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IP:
Presyce
structure was decent...some of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a little cause of the few stretched lines...u had a few multis...wordplay was ok...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...
Golden Shellz
structure was pretty good...flow was good for the most part...no multis...wordplay wasnt good...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...
Overall
Golden Shellz had the better structure...and the more stable flow...neither had good personals...Presyce had more multis...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Presyce gets my vote...
VOTE - PRESYCE
PLEASE return the favor with an honest on the link in my sig against bullethole...thanx...
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