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IP:
amayze
structure is ok...ur lines started to get stretched towards the end though...flow fell off cause of the stretchness at the end...no multis...wordplay was wack...a few of ur punches barely connected...no good personals...
Justify
structure is good...flow is on target...u had some nice multis...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...
Overall
neither had good personal...Justify had the better overall structure...he also had the better flow...he had more multis...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Justify gets my vote...
VOTE - JUSTIFY
PLEASE return the favor with an honest on the link in my sig against bullethole...thanx...
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