MC_SYX
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure was ok...wasnt very consistent though...flow fell off a little...u had a few multis...wordplay wasnt very good...a few of ur punches barely connected...no good personals...

truth aka....
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...structure isnt very good...all of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off a little cause of the stretchnes...u had tight multis...tight wordplay...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
MC_SYX had the better structure...as well as the slightly better flow...neither had good personals...truth aka.... had more, and better multis...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...truth aka.... gets my vote...

VOTE - TRUTH AKA....

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig against bullethole...thanx...