Deliquint
structure isnt very good...most of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off cause of the stretchnes...u had some nice multis...wordplay was pretty tight...a few, at best, of ur punches connected...u had 1 personal, though it didnt connect at all...

Optimal
structure was good...flow was on target...no multis...wordplay wasnt good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Deliquint had more, and better multis...and also better wordplay...neither had good personals...Optimal had the better structure...the more stable flow...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Optimal gets my vote...

VOTE - OPTIMAL

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig against bullethole...thanx...