Soldier:
Nice opener, you got in a good personal to start it out.
I thought the kick boxer line was alright, nothing special, but better than HR, nonetheless.
I liked the ragging on his rhymes about guns and clips, another good personal.
The de-icer and lighter line was nice.
I didn't like the brussel sprouts line... I mean, I know what you meant, but it was a little limp in the wrist, if you know what I mean.
Your closer wasn't that good either. It was a good attempt on the Belgium personal, but it didn't really hit hard.

Hellrazor:
Your opener was lame.. Really really lame. Try harder..
I liked your next bar, but it was kind of a cheap shot.
The tricycle was alright. It could have been worded better, but well... it wasn't.
The cowboy bar was bad too. Wasn't personal, and not a hard hit at all.
The closer was bad too. Didn't rhyme, didn't land, didn't do anything but fill up space.

V/ Soldier

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