-SoLdIeR-
structure is good...flow is on target...u had some multis...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...personals were alright...

HellRaZoR
structure is pretty good...some of ur lines were a little out of place though...flow is on lock...no multis...u attempted wordplay but it came out wack...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a good structure....both had a good flow...-SoLdIeR- had more, and better multis...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...-SoLdIeR- gets my vote...

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