Ice Pick
structure isnt very good...u started out with stretched lines...then went to short lines...and ended with stretched lines again...flow fell off because of ur inconsistency...no multis...wordplay was pretty good...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

oOnOn_StOpOo
structure is wack...write ur lines down the page...not in paragraphs...flow fell off due to ur wack structure...no multis...no good wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals....

Overall
neither had good personals...neither had a good structure...neither had a good flow...neither had multis...Ice Pick had better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Ice Pick gets my vote...

VOTE - ICE PICK

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig against bullethole...thanx...