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IP:
The Black Plague
structure is pretty good...some of the lines seem stretched though...flow is nice...u had some tight multis...wordplay was pretty good...most of ur punches connected...decent personals...
Golden Shellz
structure is pretty nice...flow is good...u had no good multis...wordplay isnt very good...u fuckin fed...and ur other punches were wack...so none of ur punches connected...no good personals...
Overall
both had a pretty good structure...both had a good flow...The Black Plague had more, and better multis...better wordplay...more connecting punches...better personals...and he didnt feed...so basing off of that...he gets my vote....
VOTE - THE BLACK PLAGUE
PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig against bullethole...thanx...
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