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Old 07-20-04, 08:52 PM   #14
The Black Plague
... I Dont Hate...
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Mimesis clowned this mutha fucka... better everything in every category, i dont really have to explain it...

Bullethole- wack verse, punches was way played, and your struc was pretty fucked up. You really need to work on everything... your verse didn't really make sense. "your lips wont get near my grass" wtf? you are wack and should give up rappin, and that aint hate, its the truth.

Mimesis- your opener killed him, and every line after was just rubbin it in. You had better wordplay, personals, flow, struc, although your struc was off at times. Your personals were good, nice disses on his profile and shit, although your last line didn't rhyme. But other than that, nice verse.
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