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Middle Weight
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IP:
MARVOLoUsJ1009
25 wins look at all da jerk's i bend,ima drop 12 but couldn't hurt my 10-
i could tell u wasn't "good" cuzz she a girl and u got merked by "sin"-
^weak...and the overall punch was wack...not hard-hittin' and worded horribly...
dogg how u airin dem strays??,u might got a gun but its rare dat it blaze-
u a known pussy worldwide shit even "ppl in iraq" aint scared of "grenade"-
^iraq punchlines...unless ur flippin' em nice...der played as fuck
fukk a cheap debate,fukkin with me ya teeth a break,fagget meet ya fate-
why u come on rb everyday nigga all u do is seek da hate,ya peeps is fake-
^no actual punch...weak
da sad thing about ya ass is ya battle record wont even reach ya weight-
a battle with grenade is like a "birthday party" shit is a "peice of cake"-
^you used a played concept...and it sucked badly...
your no where close da me,ur at da bottom rite where ya suppose da be-
y u open b?..if crews vote was allowed ya whole team a probly vote 4 me-
^meh...decent I guess...
madd cuzz my parents was da wun dat breed dis vet,ask ya niece & neph's-
ya online career aint shit so u do like "kenyon martin" did & leave da "net"-
^worded horribly...stop stretchin' ur lines
Grenade
dawg, u couldnt hit two straight lines if you woz a train track
fuck braveheart,ur lines more stretch than wallace on the rack!
^2nd line was bleh...but it was a personal tho...first I actually liked...
like a high crack dealer,u always gettin shot for promoting shit lines
look at his name..MARVOLOUS always in front of one o,o dem 9`s!
^no...
why u gonna start beef, because i showed your wack-ass DATRUTH?
only chance u got to "drop hard" is when you standing on a roof!
^decent...
ur style leaves me more BOard than HARDWOOD..but u are sic.
Socially InCappable, you start more beef than you do spit!
^no...
you make enemies quicker than all yourthreads could make a rope..
last in a long line, im number 16 ,to show you that you aint dope..
^no...
ive shown you up to be the true representative of QUEENZ on RB..
your brain more "solid"..than the brikz that make up the N.Y.C..
^decent...
Overall: Marvellous...you need to learn how to shrink the size of your lines. That syllable count is wayyyyy too large for ur multies to be affective...you have like 20 syllables a line! that's rediculous...wayy too much
Both didn't really delivery anythin'...but Grenade did have a better overall verse which is why Grenade gets my vote. To the rest of ya'll...get off Marvellous' dick...
/v- Grenade
Return the favour and drop honest votes on the battles in my signature please. I took the time to break yours down...you can take the time to vote on mine.
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