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Middle Weight
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IP:
2HarD2LoSe
Ice pick listen to this spit//
While ur suckin my dick//
Its bigger then that homo u so call ur "Trick"//
Your rymes are whack there not slick//
While ur down there can u rub my sack//
What kinda name is Ice pick u have no talen other then suckin dick//
My flowes are tighter then ur tricks pussyholes//
When u see my name and my flowes u gotta pay tolls//
Your flowes aint as smoot as ice//
I toss them out like chinese toss fake pork friend rice//
you know my rymes are nice//
and this was only a taste of the hard 22 blue spice.//
^no offence...but line after line was horrible...
Ice Pick
i'll PUNCH IN ya VOCAL CORDS..now start da BEAT BOXIN//
CAN'T AFFORD SHOES..You a joke, kid goes around FEET KNOCKIN//
^between bad n' decent...atleast der was wordplay
U'll NEVE BEAT ME son..STICK WIT YA DREAMS..
50 cent, eminem,? WHy when you aint rapping on full steam///
^no...
Ya style is FORCED..PUSH DOWN da GRAVITY//
Came wit more FILLERS than DENTIST..DRILL thru dis CAVITY//
^played concept...but seriously...this right here won you the battle...
Overall: I won't even break down the rest of Ice Pick's verse...at that point...the battle was already over and he won...Hard2Lose...you need to come hard with some creative shit...ramblin bout how he's suckin' ur dick isn't exactly effective...that won't even get u on respect on the streets...just a bunch of peeps dissin' u. I'm tryin to help...not make fun. Get at some cats to help u elevate..
/v- Ice Pick
Return the favour and drop honest votes on the battles in my signature please. I took the time to break yours down...you can take the time to vote on mine.
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