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Old 07-20-04, 09:36 PM   #14
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aiight aiight


HI-c
your lyrics like a shotty? take my mind from my body?
too bad this battle gon be like 50 vs. kadafi..
whereas my thoughts are collected, organized, urs are sloppy..
even if u was a senior citizen's chair u couldnt rock me..
so dont try to stop me, cos you newbie you ain't prepared..
put yourself into a trap against me, now ur ensnared..
there aint no turnin back, just dont be a sore loser..
no doubt this'll be a knockout quicker then a star cruiser..
ima blow you away, the matter of the fact is sir..
you dracterrible, im the one thats dractacular..

^^^really wasn't feelin this.......no wordplay...no vocab...pretty lame flow....structure was even....need to learn some multis.....and amp ya game level..

5/10mics

Dractacular

dractac means spectac dat could neva be u
u need to take ur cena raps back to winnie da pooh
imma senior in dis game even though rb says im new
if u dont like da way a roll take me to court and suit
u call urself hi c but ur high on dat e
pills of course ur a drug attic it is plain to see
in dis industry u can call me the golden key
in dis industry dey can call u da honey bee
theres two things i trust my money and my gack
i got a hunter minds dats why i stab niggaz in da back

^^^^didn't impress me any......lame wordplay..no vocab...no flow....simple concepts...no creativity......

4/10mics

Both came aiight....for NEWBS.....niether had vocab,wordplay,decent punches,multis,metas,and personals......but in my mind HI-C actually attempted to use it.....he came alil harder and more on point the DRA

Wordplay....Niether
Punches.......Hi
vocab........Hi
multis....Niether
Personals.....Niether

Vote-------HI-C

and P.S.......HI-c i wanna battle you...your more on my level then He is....so if your down set it up and we can rumble aiight
ones

No hate
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