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Old 07-20-04, 11:35 PM   #21
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V/WillNova - More consistant and attacked opponent more.

WillNova - Verse was below average sorry man. Some of your bars were wack too like the 'chefs who can cook' line and 'raping you for insurance'??? You were more personal though cause you played around with where he lives. Soft verse but closer was alright. Keep elevating.

Etcetera - Your first lines were decent but after that it seemed you fell apart. You started solf-glorifying and that didn't even relate to your opponent. Weak punches and filler also. Keep elevating.

Returning the favor.
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