Marvolous= ya verse was good man good job on ya punches ya structre was good and it had a nice flow.....good use of multis too...maybe some betta vocab but u had nice wordplay too...........
Grenade=ya verse was ok...it had some punches but didnt hit as hard as marvolous punches did... ya structure was straight too.... just elevate on punches..........
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