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Old 07-21-04, 05:19 AM   #15
GrEnAdE
Banned: Cheating
 
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Ok

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Almighty
I don't wanna hear no gangsta stuff in this free cuz yoshitty keep those lyrics 2 yourself cause u play 2 much vice city//
^MULTIES...but horrible punch

now plz tell me how many battles u been in cuz if u played pocket pool wit urself u still wouldn't be winnin //
^i get it,but it woz weak...wrk on set-up

these are lyrics that you'll never know u practice suckin dick wit miracle whip and a dildo//
^gay lines,dnt use them...nobody votes on em no more,unless they real original

this is one great battle that u cannot spit ur dad bust in ur eye so now u rockin a patch like slick rick//
^wtf?..thats horrible

if iwere u i wouldn't want 2 b in that situationthere are other ways besides gay porn that could get money makin//
^ugh...gay

trigga matrix thinks he's got a safe spit but doesn't realize that if he tries to dodge bullets he's one dead bitch//
^aiight concept..setup spoils it again...but gunz are another no-no,unless its original

knowin that im goin and flowin wit such eazehow do you cease 2 believethat uv'e met the mc that could kill u wit jus flow head 2 toe cuz i'm the Almighty
^self glorification.another n0-no

TRIGGA MATRIX
kill this bitch almighty with easy ill intentionz//
rip your organs out so you can see all your Connections//
^decent wordplay,weak punch

wrap a rope around your neck just to see you get Strangled//
cut your eyes out and hang them..so you can see your ass Dangle//(get it)
^the best bar of the battle...n it woz aiight.. 6/10

if i gave you the mic what would be your Statement//
it would be just as poor as me not telling you i Buried you family under your basement//
^weak coz it aint personal ...bad concept

this is pretty poor that i gotta leave you sonned in one thread//
i'm sorry if they said rap was easy as sucking dick you really got miss-lead//
^weak...gay line..ok multi,wordplay...

well i gotta go this was a fast verses//
any anything is good for beating this newibe even gunit101 verses//
^wudve bin gud,i like how u used gunit......but u rhymed the same words n structure woz fucked...decent flow


ALMIGHTY-u need to stop with gay lines,guns and self-glorification..
there played n wnt win u votes...other than that your flow n structures good but u need punches that are creative n make sense.....personals are best to rip on....also u need setup your punches so the second line hits coz it goes wit tha first.

TRIGGA-ive noticed u hve good rhyming and flow...
but again your punches were weak..that basement line it dosent hit ur opponent.i think u need to use personals....n think b4 u type.try get sum sicker concept 4 ur punches

overall////TRIGGA...punches were better,even though they wernt hot