CERULEAN..lines far too stertched which ruined your flow...
apart from that it was all self glorification
i didnt see any punches that connected wit ur opponent
elevate
GANGSTAR-nice spit
good flow...mainly cos u used plenty of multies
nice easy to read structure
sum very gud concepts/creativity in your ounches
maybe u cud add sum more personals
but overall very nice...very one-sided
votegangstar
return tha fav plz men.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136222