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Old 07-21-04, 10:40 AM   #13
ibraheem
Flyweight
 
Posts: 146
From: London
let me analyis it

IP:

Sporadic

This herb reFUSE's to spit first so he can feed on my lyrical creation
coz he lacks in interlect,
...and an active battle imagination
ok nothing great 5/10

Your static just not going anywhere, while my elevation is persistant
your talent is like ur avatar character,
...fake and nonexistant
nice imagination 7/10

can tell hes a herb by his basic rhymes the name emcee u abuse
shock him with lyrical voltage
...call me a electric surge the way this fuse
good personal 7/10

taking dignity, strangle your pride for pleasure like your penis when u jerk it
your rhymes are like a current
...whens theres no complete circuit!
nice but no conection between the lines 6/10

Got you SHOCKED got you squeezed like bacteria when your zit popping
squeezing ass cheeks together
...is the only good shit u be droppin!
ok aint great 6/10

31/50
6.2/10 nice overall good imagination used the name well flow was ok good punches

Fuse

your lyrics are O.K. i didnt know you had it in you.//
your name speaks for itself not to continue//
ok 5/10

Your a hoe nigga, ya'll all the same.//
i can tell you love me by how many times you used my name.//
wack didnt feel it 4/10

in all your bars your lackin.//
your name is also a rock band so stop rappin
hummm??? 4/10

you say you got me shocked so i guess i'm energized.//
by the time you done readin i'll have you teary eyed.//
nice punch 7/10

I'm ya daddy so best belive i'ma spank you.//
Your mom gave me head advice so tell her thank you.//
gay didnt feel it at all 4/10

24/50
4.8/10
flow was wack had some punches aint that hard though like on personal thats about it

have to give my vote to sporadic for the use of imagination and coming harder
with respect for both of you

hit my battles if u feel bored for retern of favor

peace