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Old 07-21-04, 10:46 AM   #15
Ice Pick
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Sporadic

This herb reFUSE's to spit first so he can feed on my lyrical creation
coz he lacks in interlect,
...and an active battle imagination
ok nothing great 6/10

Your static just not going anywhere, while my elevation is persistant
your talent is like ur avatar character,
...fake and nonexistant
nice imagination 6/10

can tell hes a herb by his basic rhymes the name emcee u abuse
shock him with lyrical voltage
...call me a electric surge the way this fuse
good personal 8/10

taking dignity, strangle your pride for pleasure like your penis when u jerk it
your rhymes are like a current
...whens theres no complete circuit!
nice but no conection between the lines 5/10

Got you SHOCKED got you squeezed like bacteria when your zit popping
squeezing ass cheeks together
...is the only good shit u be droppin!
ok aint great 6/10

31/50


Fuse

your lyrics are O.K. i didnt know you had it in you.//
your name speaks for itself not to continue//
ok 4/10

Your a hoe nigga, ya'll all the same.//
i can tell you love me by how many times you used my name.//
wack didnt feel it 3/10

in all your bars your lackin.//
your name is also a rock band so stop rappin
hummm??? 3/10

you say you got me shocked so i guess i'm energized.//
by the time you done readin i'll have you teary eyed.//
nice punch 7/10

I'm ya daddy so best belive i'ma spank you.//
Your mom gave me head advice so tell her thank you.//
gay didnt feel it at all 4/10


21 out of 50


that is my break down it didnt all fit for some reason
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