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Old 07-21-04, 11:33 AM   #14
ibraheem
Flyweight
 
Posts: 146
From: London
analysis

IP:

KNOK-SIOZ

Im packin so much heat riffs sweatin~like~a~bitch...
Im rappin so unique the freaks gettin~beat~ta~shit...
struggled to make it rhyme fucked the idea up 4/10

Once i upload, this ho's response is already~known...
But RBC knows his fuckin ass is cum~tan~toned....
not bad 4/10

You lost your riff so you can't~be~venomous~no~more...
Drag his ass to tha rookie camp an beat~a~lesson~into~this~whore....
personal decent 6/10

Your a pussy bitch, so you know you can't CUM~off~better....
Your wearin a vest? thats ok because my rhymes~hack~and~sever...
best so far 7/10

I slit~riffs an blast~raffs your dead now son....
Leave you blood stained like a month old tampon...
didnt feel the punch 4/10

25/50
5/10
not bad not good had some punches but they were weak used the name thats about it

!RIFF RAFF!

If I woulda known you were comin that hard I woulda let ya think 4 an extra hour
I physically felt ya rhymes dawg, thats why im cleanin my self off in the shower
that was shit 3/10

me battlin a newbie like you is like child abuse its just not right
but then they see skill like urs and they let that law slide
nice good punch my favorite 7/10

brutally beating you for a victory, most will say im a dick
but im truley being nice by deciding to let you keep your pink slip
ok 5/10

So get out the door quick, and stay down
u lucky i dont know where u live other wise I woulda emberassed u wit ya whole town
didnt feel it 4/10

sorry for posting late ur verse grabbed my shoulders but it stopped
just had to take a couple of extra minutes to brush my shoulders off
nice ending 7/10

26/50
5.2/10

good punches not enough of em though shit lines fucked the verse up but i konw you can do much better from my battle with you its close shit
my vote goes 2 riff raff for using harder punches

with respect for both of you

hit my battles up safe

peace