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Old 07-21-04, 11:57 AM   #12
ibraheem
Flyweight
 
Posts: 146
From: London
ok lets break this shit down

IP:

Trajed'ee

You a whack MC, I called your style a pussy and ate it//

You get knocked like strippers takin money for cock, its sadly stated//
there is nothing good about eating pussy lol 4/10

Im hot like stole glockz... my numbers scratched, serial, makin thunder crack...//

Ya dome, its own, enter tha zone, get blown//
no conection imaginative though 6/10

Dont get caught home alone or you gone//

I spit Pinhead flows and pierce shit//
weak 3/10

Im all war you jus a tug, my punches are like Ali they never forfeit tha gloves//

Man, this cat gets slapped, its really that serious//

He's gon' spill blood like I ended my rap wit a period//
one more comparssion to ali im sick of now she ending 4/10

17/40
4.25/10
well had one punch thats it no use for personals flow was ok structure is fucked could'v use more multis

!RIFF RAFF!

Like a LEPRACHAN in a DRY CLEANER, ya PRESSIN' ya LUCK
I'm like HAMMER in his glory days, I CAN'T BE TOUCHED
not bad 5/10

I'm the baddest bitch to ever step on this planet
spit lyrics so SICK not even DOCTORS can understand it
nice i like it 8/10

I don't wander off the subject, I get down to the specifics
have 2 review my rhymes twice cuz they complicated like hieroglyphics
over complicated it didnt sound right 4/10

Trajed'ee thinks he's got skill but he just cant see
beating him is simple like its simple counting one two three
basic personal 5/10

You lucky that theres no feeding, or i'd tear your ass to shreads,
Becausing everyones hating this nigger, like 300 sdizzle threads,
decent 6/10

28/50
5.6/10
riff raff there is some stuff there that i loved i think you took this battle due to harder punches and more personal good use of imagination
vote; riff raff

with respect for both of you

hit my battles for a retern of favor

peace