Flyweight
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ok lets break this shit down
IP:
Trajed'ee
You a whack MC, I called your style a pussy and ate it//
You get knocked like strippers takin money for cock, its sadly stated//
there is nothing good about eating pussy lol 4/10
Im hot like stole glockz... my numbers scratched, serial, makin thunder crack...//
Ya dome, its own, enter tha zone, get blown//
no conection imaginative though 6/10
Dont get caught home alone or you gone//
I spit Pinhead flows and pierce shit//
weak 3/10
Im all war you jus a tug, my punches are like Ali they never forfeit tha gloves//
Man, this cat gets slapped, its really that serious//
He's gon' spill blood like I ended my rap wit a period//
one more comparssion to ali im sick of now she ending 4/10
17/40
4.25/10
well had one punch thats it no use for personals flow was ok structure is fucked could'v use more multis
!RIFF RAFF!
Like a LEPRACHAN in a DRY CLEANER, ya PRESSIN' ya LUCK
I'm like HAMMER in his glory days, I CAN'T BE TOUCHED
not bad 5/10
I'm the baddest bitch to ever step on this planet
spit lyrics so SICK not even DOCTORS can understand it
nice i like it 8/10
I don't wander off the subject, I get down to the specifics
have 2 review my rhymes twice cuz they complicated like hieroglyphics
over complicated it didnt sound right 4/10
Trajed'ee thinks he's got skill but he just cant see
beating him is simple like its simple counting one two three
basic personal 5/10
You lucky that theres no feeding, or i'd tear your ass to shreads,
Becausing everyones hating this nigger, like 300 sdizzle threads,
decent 6/10
28/50
5.6/10
riff raff there is some stuff there that i loved i think you took this battle due to harder punches and more personal good use of imagination
vote; riff raff
with respect for both of you
hit my battles for a retern of favor
peace
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