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Old 07-21-04, 12:20 PM   #12
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your structure wasnt good..it was actually fair..but you had hard hitin punches and pretty nice
personals this was nice work...you had fair flow..but need improvement on harder hitting punches
i felt you came harder then riff raff and won this battle cleanly..
8.3/10


riff raff.
you had decent structure except for the first line..but you got better structure then him..
your pucnehs didnt hit hard..well they hit hard but not hard enought to match to his..
not much persoanls and calling him a dickrider with out proof gets you know where its juss weak
overall 7.4/10

vote state capitol..easy ..pece
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