oOnOn_StOpOo

2 Hard 2 Lose....niga Ya Luck Just Ran Out///tha Only Way U Lightin A Fire Is From Ur Trainin As A Boy Scout///
humm ok 5/10

unlike You Dis Nigga Is Multitalented///ur Puttin A Burden On Ya Shoulder Tha You Cant Even Balance Yet///
not much sense 4/10

non Stops Verbal Tactics Is Redifining Illness///know I've Won Dis Battle When Dis Sucka Is Standing In Complete Stillness///
ok not bad 6/10

i Serve Niggas Up And Ur The Next One In Line///flow As Wack As Urs Should Be Considered A Crime///
heard it before 3/10

suffer Tha Impact Of Mah Nine///your Wastin Mah Time///
shit shit 2/10

ur Spittin Blanks///battle Me And Ur Goin Down In The Ranks///
wack 4/10

non Stop......the Hottest New Edition To New York Since A-rod Coming To Tha Yanks
decent ending 6/10

30/70
4.2/10
structure is fucked not much personals if there wer any at all flow was ok nothing intresting

2HarD2LoSe

Non stop likes too watch my nutts drop//and they flows pop//
no feeding ay 3/10

so u think ur hott 2 take on who?//well ur not good enuf to take on the jew(im the jew lol)//
funny me ibraheem bate muslim name judging at a jew lol no hate its all love 5/10

so just leave now and dont hate cause ur gonna lose and dont blaime this on ur booze//that ur drinkin go take a shower cause ur like ur flows "UR STINKIN"//
not bad 5/10

I drop my flows as nice as a straight ace,king,queen,jack,ten my flows are so beautiful ill take my flows and ur girl on a date// and watch me win this battle//
shit first line is streched like a mothafucka wack 3/10

ur like a horse rider with no saddle//u aint got no house u live in a shack with a beatup 22 cent labtop in the back//
so u lost stop reading my rymes and get off my sack.//
not related finish is ok 4/10

20/50
4/10
ok structure is fucked not hard punches wack personals flow has been lost
this is hard to judge 0.2 diffrence you both need to fix your structures and use more personals i have to give it to oOnOn_StOpOo for having better flow
vote;oOnOn_StOpOo

with respect for both of you

hit up my battles if you're bored

peace