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Old 07-21-04, 02:48 PM   #9
The Black Plague
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Not a great battle...both verses were kinda off... 2h2l aight start to your verse, but then your last 6 lines were wack, especially your closer..... J Trooper, decent verse, you came more consistent than he did, all around your verse was more on track, and ya punches connected better, your struc was a little off, and your last line din't fit... Struc was about the same from both...2h2l, your punches were way played, and since J was more consistent, he gets my vote
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