Thuglifeoutlaw - You need to work on ur structure. Make it definate where ya rhymes are. I couldn't tell where one bar ended and tha next started. Ya flow was basic. You didn't have any punches but i guess ya had a couple of multi's. Good luck and keep elevatin. 4/10
Fuse - Your spit was basic too. But you had a punch or so in there. Which gave you tha up. Lyrically you need to elevate and find some better rhymes. Keep elevatin. 5/10
Vote: Fuse