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~Cursed With Illness~
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IP:
J Dot - One thing i liked bout ya rhymes was the gangsta mentality. Ya shit had that edge but some of ya shit didn't even rhyme. LOL. Good structure, easy to read. Ya closer was whack. Good luck and keep elevatin. 5/10
M.F.P. - Your rhymes need some elevatin too but all of yo shit rhymed. You had a punch or so in there. And a few multi's. Structure could of been better. Overall not a bad verse. 6.5/10
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