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Old 07-21-04, 04:00 PM   #8
For$akeN
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Ice Pick's Drop:

Let me bomb-this-imposter/
in battlez you bring "no style-N-punchez" like Amish-boxerz/
weak opener syllable was way off flow was not well done 3.5/10
pardon-this, arsonist/
i tarnish-kidz-startin sh*t/
specially thoze who take skill and not have part-in-it/
weak 2nd line was self-glorification line aswell....4/10
kid, your less-then-me use discrepancy BEFORE bringing text-to-me/
yo your verze, like nun strip clubz.. in NO WAY interestin-me!/
umm wordplay I saw thats cool wit me........7/10
your rhymez are meaning-less which mean-they-wak/
punk kid, you cop so many beatingz like sega you "dream-of-cast'z"/
nope....5/10
Toon nice name ? im best-fit-with-u callin me master/
your intestinez-get-splattered to bring pain like testicular cancer/
weak shit wasn't feeling it much 5/10
itz wrong-to-hate, but fagget mc'z i abominate/
such as Toon, spit online then with malez he likes to date/
okay this deserves a low ass score
mainly the because of the fact that gay lines are played
as fuck and uncreative also unless you don't have proof
don't even type it seriously 0/10

victory against Toon, followed by nothing-less then morning-breath/
catch me scorning ya chest til ya i-net "family" mourning-at-best!/
okay.....don't use that same sounding of words and spell it differently to me its odd......6.5/10
each increment you see me spit-this-writ, my sentiment.. bring pain like dentist-kidz/
TOon the mic, i OWN-THIS.. you rent-the-shIt/
2nd line was half-self glorification......6/10

overall: 4.5/10


Toon's Drop:

i aint a chick, and i dont lick pussy, but i can getthis ice dike-to-shiver...
think youll win?? u must be in 'da-nile'(denial)like-the-river//
haha nice wordplay pretty hot opener 8/10
Start to grieve, better believe you should be expecting ur first loss…
You couldn’t luck out if both sides of a coin were tails in a coin toss//
liking it 7.5/10
Lyrically beat you so bad they had to perform amputation…
i stopped ur heart beat so now there’s no blood circulatin//
damn...not hard hitting but in a way gruesome 6.5/10
i'll make u take death as its handed like `receiving pictures` of the 'devil'...
you winning is like a dwarf marrying snow white, its not true all fable//
yea liking it.....7/10
Ill be the first to pronounce u burnt and throw a mic in ur grave…
Throw your bones in the great wall, then continue to pave//
cold-hearted loving that shit 7/10

overall: 7.2/10

vote: Toon for much better flow/syllable count and harder hitting
punches aswell............................................ .................
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