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Old 07-21-04, 04:26 PM   #16
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OMG...Ill Tempa maaaaaan...I'm likin the punches and the rhyme scheme ta go with it. Almost rhymin perfectly with the rhymes in the middle of the lines too. I'm likin it. T had a good verse but Ill just had lines in there that stunned me. Good closure ILL. You Kill'd em in the punches, metas, and structure. Ill tempa gets mah vote.

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