Thread: schema vs. RV
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Old 07-21-04, 05:35 PM   #7
T West
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schema:
youre too small to bring it spit some flame and get trampled
i'm still trying to figure out why you're named for a camper
but i dont complain i give advice...for example
all you need to shine is a good sample
^nah...not feelin' it at all...

so here's how i think you should go
take a line out of my shit and make it sound like its somethin you wrote
build your verse around it and you're bound to sound dope
i won't say nothin and im sure that you won't...wait don't
^nope...

cause i dont wanna be the reason that you got sad
people left reviews on your shit and youre all mad
"the first 15 bars were garbage but that other one's not bad"
so i guess youre better off thinking of something hot fast
^2nd line is meh...the rest is nah...

rv...park yourself for this one and don't let it get too scary
cause i wrote this without a thesaurus or a rhyming dictionary
^you had the right idea in the start....2nd line was a no...

or a beat or a notebook or even a second glance
and even so you dont stand a chance
^nope...



RV
i guess this battle, i gotta take a lil lighthearted
cuz you challenging me proves to all that you're retarded
^nope...

this is me against you, hood taking a hillbilly
i feel like im going one on one with a fake ass TIMMAY!
^I get the punch...but no...failed attempt

say u wanted one more battle before your ass went to sleep
but we kno you're just waiting for your porno MP3
^who would want a porno MP3? porno sounds without the video? hell no...u just couldn;t think of a punch that rhymed with sleep...

to finish up, so then you can get your self to sleep
cleaning up after busting to ur homosexual fantasies
^stop with the sex punches already...

and don't try to comeback with anythin similar 2 mine
i'll shoot you more times than 50 got, leave your punk ass dying
^...no...

leave your mama crying for ya, then ill fuck her up too
do like you do to gay men and leave her sweating and screwed
^this is gettin' worse by the line...

but when it all comes to an end, and i'm done battlin you
fact will be fact and ima still rhyme shit better than you
^no...

now i was about to smack you up again but it seems your already dead
so i leave you alone now and hit up your mama's bed
^holy fuck...another sex punch

Overall: Nothin' stood out in this battle...But I guess since I have to vote, i'd go with Schema. Atleast he didn't come with a gay sex punch every 2 seconds...like seriously man...even in a live battle...that stuff would be wack.

/v- Schema

Please return the favour and drop honest votes on my battles please. I took the time to vote on yours...you can do the same.
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