breakdown...................

sporadic........
... u came nice... kinda simplistic rhymes.. but u stressed teh topic good ..staying focused throughout your verse..... you explained it well.... it was atleast drawling a picture in my head..... i liked it.... you kinda stratched some lines though... but for the most part flow was on....

Ibraheem- you had real nice multis... keeping the verse with a nice flow... but again u kinda streatched your bars out to.....you seem to have more of the 'battle mind set... dun worry i do the same in topicals..... im just saying u need to fovus more on drawling a picture......k

my vote- Sporadic.....

liked the mental picture.... nice steady flow for the most part...

i took the time.. so boht of u should take the time...... and drop a vote on this....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136489

^ thanks.....

keep progressin boys

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