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Old 07-21-04, 05:50 PM   #3
For$akeN
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Scriptive's Drop:

so you say you like freestylin and fucking girls and guys-
ill tell you how i know, because im your dad in disguise-
hmm...what the hell??? weak 5/10
why did you agree to this battle, your gonna get ripped-
i know this guys biggest secret, he is nondescript-
weak once again no hard hitting punch 6/10
"Scriptive come out victorious once again" as expected-
you don't wanna fuck wit me im socially connected-
self-glorification is a no-no 5/10
four lines to go this guy can't take any more, he's dead-
make it look dramatic he's bin shot in a rose bed-
not feeling the concept and punch 4.5/10
this is the last time this guys gonna be able to read-
this battle was easy it's a 5-0 win to me garenteed-
2nd line self-glorification 5.5/10

overall: 6/10 (extra for syllable count/flow...)

ENERGY'S Drop:

so dat name is gay called somet weird called scripture/
your dat weirdo who masterbates over child pictures/
if hes a pedophile prove it okay...
very fake personal 4/10

your rhymes are weekerning mine, yours just wine/
and I got no time for your week ass to shine/
nope no complexity 3/10
i'll be gutting this little bitch wid a razor blade /
use the same blade I just shaved my ballz wid/
didn't rhyme at all and it was mainly
disgusting and unhumorous and killing them is played...4/10

im the biggest rhymer, and ders no one else finer/
you'll be an autograpgh signer paying me loadse dollers/
self-glorification both lines........4.5/10
your nothing, just a nobody from machester city /
2 me your shitty and you might aswell focus on footy/
didn't really rhyme and stating where
hes from does not make a very good personal sorry...3.5/10


overall: 3.8/10

vote: Scriptive
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