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Old 07-21-04, 06:29 PM   #19
Kizza
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I'll rip out your vocal cords and use them "To Floss", while your "salad" is gettin "tossed",
Somebody call "Red Cross", this cat just got caught up in my "Lyrical Holocaust
8/10. a lil stretched is why this wasnt a 10 opener
All you did was "Recycle" your "Recital" but I'm too "Spiteful"...
Then I'll kick you in the mouth and leave your name "Untitled"...
7/10. it's still ok.
You on your “knees” more than a “Muslim family” in deep “Prayer”,...
Flow got your rhymes “skipping” more than a“jump rope”and “Cheap CD player”...
9/10. still a lil stretched.
I didn’t wanna "fight you" I just called you a faggot to "spite you"...
Dispite that you scream when you see a day care coz little boys "EXCITE you"....
7/10. lil boys thing gettin played
Mass-iv-soul' jab-u-low'the last-u-seen-ill-flow'was in a Original'class-sick-video' ...
i stop heart's like "resperrator's"'then digest-the-hater 'leave ya body to rest-in-crator's'...
7/10. we doin bars or lines?
overall you had decent flow, nice wordplay and ok structure. 7/10.

dog battleing me you got more nuts...than some used condoms/
you lost this battle... and im still stuck wit the problem of writers soloum/
8/10. good opener, would have been better as a closer.
this guy came as a newbie under the name of presynce/
changed a couple of letters around...cuase he didnt want us to know he was a fag and a fan of nsynce/
6/10. sound like somethin my sister might say if I was buggin da hoody
dog your lines garbage...and played out like sega genesis/
my lines are pousinous...i guess we can say there venonemiss/
6/10. not sure of the direction with your structure.
dog you couldnt stop a heart...if you played a major role like aids/
spit lyrics like bullets... and watch graze the top of your fade/
9/10. last part lets the first line down. 8/10 to the first line.
like your sig say dog im'a put you on hard wood...cause im in the upper class of sick/
after this battle you gonna be on my dick ima suck up...another win like a tick/
8/10. decent closer.
overall I'ma have to give the thing a 7/10.

in event of a tiebreaker I'll go by the fact that meta got2 6's and pres didnt get nothin lower than a 7


vote: presyce