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Old 07-21-04, 06:39 PM   #9
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Soulness takes it with better punches. I got lost on 2h2ls third bar. I dunno what the fuck he said there. Try ta make your lines a little shorter too. Soulness wins this with an overall better flow with punches and a good structure that was easy to follow.

"I never used to snore in my sleep 'til this rap shit started
Warm thoughts fill the hot-headed and cold-hearted
Your whole paycheck, you burp it and then fart it"

-Ludacris_Blow it Out

"This battle was over b4 the votes started/
i printed ur rymes read and laughed stuck em up my ass and farted,
i know im very cold hearted/"

-2h2l

Shit sounds the same ta me....

Vote-Soulness

Vote on these:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136079

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135031

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136136
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