i'll make u take death as its handed like `receiving pictures` of the 'devil'...
you winning is like a dwarf marrying snow white, its not true all fable

I didnt get the rhyme here and the flow is a bit stretched.....this threw me off TooNs flow totally although I can't say Ice Pick came wit anything much harder. ice pick you had some real nice vocab and meta's but you need to re arrange ya structure.

vote: .TooN.