ok J_trooper had this on. good flow and style and complexity and vocab. however you forgot to rhyme the last line. it was like you just stuck it in there. um there were no personals that i saw so work on that. the punches were go but not directed to 2h2l. ithink you definally need work but the it was pretty good for a beginner. best line: cop the techniques kid im pre-warnin you im good//
elax lips ah have u catchin em in the back like ricky off boyz in the hood//

2h2l work on alot you were simple as hell. nad the flow was pretty gay style was ok. punch and personals (but since he's new i can understand). work on how simple ou lines are. this on you lost. best line:I do rap dealz not rap battlez but for this i can make an acception/
got ur ass in a do or die situation while ur callin for body protection/

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