Heartfelt fasho - goodlookin. Work on grammer, or spelling though - as some parts were a little harder to flow with cause the word was "and" instead of "any". Was it supposed to be an off syllable count? I don't know alot about poetry - but I know some things I;ve read are not equal to the line previous - and I dont know if thats what you were going for or not. Good lookin anyways - keep droppin.

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